Observational pen drawing

I found this peice of work hard to do as there was no control, I find that I like to have more control over my work so I didn't enjoy this as much, however, I have done three pieces of work on this page two where I have made the pen bleed and one without, but both have less control than using pencil.

Here is a picture of my page 

The pocket has my annotation in, here is a close up and my annotation.

In this page I have also shown where I've used shade and tone 

Here are close ups of all my work